evening sun reflects
colors foretelling weather
water appears on fire
Posted by siggiofmaine in Uncategorized
Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
January 29, 2013 at 3:48 pm
Contrast between second and third line is great.
January 29, 2013 at 8:34 pm
Thank you for the wonderful comment.
January 29, 2013 at 2:10 pm
Love the last line .. and i like this theme
January 29, 2013 at 8:35 pm
Thank you for taking time to write such a nice comment…
January 29, 2013 at 1:26 pm
you have written a lovely haiku – I can see water from my home and at sunset the water is indeed on fire…
January 29, 2013 at 8:37 pm
I love seeing the colors of the sunset reflected on water….red is awesome, but so, in my mind, is “cremesicle” orange….cheery.
January 29, 2013 at 6:48 am
Beautifully composed … love the contrast in this one.
Appreciate the lovely comment from you.
January 29, 2013 at 6:08 am
As long as the fields don’t burn too, it will be Shepard’s Delight
January 29, 2013 at 8:39 pm
Shepard’s Delight…I have not heard that before..but I understand the meaning of the term. Thank you for the comment.
January 29, 2013 at 2:40 am
Love the stark contrast of the last line! Beautifully descriptive!
Thank you for the lovely comment. Appreciate it.
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