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evening sun reflects . colors foretelling weather . water appears on fire
Posted by siggiofmaine in Uncategorized
Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
January 29, 2013 at 3:48 pm
Contrast between second and third line is great.
siggiofmaine
January 29, 2013 at 8:34 pm
Bjorn Thank you for the wonderful comment.
ladynimue
January 29, 2013 at 2:10 pm
Love the last line .. and i like this theme
January 29, 2013 at 8:35 pm
ladynimue Thank you for taking time to write such a nice comment…
4joy
January 29, 2013 at 1:26 pm
you have written a lovely haiku – I can see water from my home and at sunset the water is indeed on fire…
January 29, 2013 at 8:37 pm
4joy I love seeing the colors of the sunset reflected on water….red is awesome, but so, in my mind, is “cremesicle” orange….cheery.
Chevrefeuille
January 29, 2013 at 6:48 am
Beautifully composed … love the contrast in this one.
Chevrefeuille Appreciate the lovely comment from you.
jrbsays
January 29, 2013 at 6:08 am
As long as the fields don’t burn too, it will be Shepard’s Delight
January 29, 2013 at 8:39 pm
jrbsays Shepard’s Delight…I have not heard that before..but I understand the meaning of the term. Thank you for the comment.
Gemma Wiseman
January 29, 2013 at 2:40 am
Love the stark contrast of the last line! Beautifully descriptive!
Gemma, Thank you for the lovely comment. Appreciate it.
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
Contrast between second and third line is great.
siggiofmaine
Bjorn
Thank you for the wonderful comment.
ladynimue
Love the last line .. and i like this theme
siggiofmaine
ladynimue
Thank you for taking time to write such a nice comment…
4joy
you have written a lovely haiku – I can see water from my home and at sunset the water is indeed on fire…
siggiofmaine
4joy
I love seeing the colors of the sunset reflected on water….red is awesome, but so, in my mind, is “cremesicle” orange….cheery.
Chevrefeuille
Beautifully composed … love the contrast in this one.
siggiofmaine
Chevrefeuille
Appreciate the lovely comment from you.
jrbsays
As long as the fields don’t burn too, it will be Shepard’s Delight
siggiofmaine
jrbsays
Shepard’s Delight…I have not heard that before..but I understand the meaning of the term. Thank you for the comment.
Gemma Wiseman
Love the stark contrast of the last line! Beautifully descriptive!
siggiofmaine
Gemma,
Thank you for the lovely comment. Appreciate it.