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Basho’s famous ‘the old pond’ is the first stanza of our Tan Renga.
The goal of this Tan Renga Challenge is to write the second stanza
(7-7, but don’t count them strict) of the Tan Renga.
The first stanza is as written and we complete the Tan Renga
with our second stanza inspired and associated on the first stanza.
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First stanza: (Matsuo Basho, 1644-1694)..
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the old pond
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a frog jumps in –
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the sound of water
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Second stanza (by Siggi:)
the old pond
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a frog jumps in –
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the sound of water
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Second stanza (by Siggi:)
water sounds follow
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five ducklings follow suite
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
July 11, 2013 at 5:04 pm
I love the ducklings.. they fit so well in the pond…
Sigrid Gerstner Stevens Saradunn
July 12, 2013 at 12:12 am
Bjorn,
Thank you for the nice comment…appreciate it.
Peace
Siggi
Chevrefeuille
July 11, 2013 at 1:36 pm
A wonderful completion of the Tan Renga Sigrid, it’s really a joy to read all those different completions of the Tan Renga by Basho.
Sigrid Gerstner Stevens Saradunn
July 12, 2013 at 12:11 am
Kris,
Thank you for taking time to leave a comment…I also am enjoying reading all the posts… great prompt, btw.
Peace
Siggi