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© 8/2/2011 Sigrid Saradunn; Sorrento, Maine harbor where inspiration flows.
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The Challenge is to write a second stanza (7-7)
in response and associated on the first stanza (5-7-5)
and make the Tan Renga complete.

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1st stanza (5-7-5)

gently fluttering
on shimmering wings of blue
inspiration flows                                  (JRB)

2nd stanza (7-7)

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Here is  my completion
of the Tan Renga started by JRB :

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gently fluttering
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on shimmering wings of blue
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inspiration flows……………(JRB)

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spirit’s whimsy ~ soul soars
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illumination

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(SBS)

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