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original painting; watercolor on YUPO
© 2011 Sigrid Saradunn
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such a beautiful face
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deep spirit wounds
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clawed with verbs and adjectives
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beautiful soul changed
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© 2013 Sigrid Saradunn
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The goal of this Tan Renga Challenge is to write a
second stanza (7-7)
to complete the Tan Renga written by Chèvrefeuille: .
Tan Renga is very similar with Tanka,
but Tan Renga is written by two poets.
It’s a short form of the Kasen Renga
or the Renga (chained verse).
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(5-7-5) written by Chèvrefeuille:
First stanza (5-7-5):
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be a dreamcatcher
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fly like an eagle
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as free as a bird in the sky
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be a dreamcatcher
……………………………….. by Chèvrefeuille
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snatch dreams from your highest source
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soar higher than ever dreamed
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……………………sbs
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© 2011 Sigrid Saradunn
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quiet times special
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souls share ancestors wisdom
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ancient voices heard
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ancient voices heard
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speak truth of ages past ~ present
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heed truth of wise words
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