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© 2013 Sigrid Saradunn
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The goal of this Tan Renga Challenge is to write a
second stanza (7-7)
to complete the Tan Renga written by Chèvrefeuille: .
Tan Renga is very similar with Tanka,
but Tan Renga is written by two poets.
It’s a short form of the Kasen Renga
or the Renga (chained verse).
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(5-7-5) written by Chèvrefeuille:

First stanza (5-7-5):
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fly like an eagle
as free as a bird in the sky

be a dreamcatcher 

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Second stanza (7-7)
 
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The inspired Tan Renga

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fly like an eagle
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as free as a bird in the sky
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be a dreamcatcher

……………………………….. by Chèvrefeuille
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snatch dreams from your highest source
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soar higher than ever dreamed
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……………………sbs

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