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© 2013 Sigrid Saradunn
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“Naisaiku”
It’s a wonderful ‘artistic’ (and artificial)
form which I enjoy to write..

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Tiger Lily
heart sings viewing
in sunlight


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in sunlight
heart sings viewing
Tiger lily


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My First Naisaiku
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Tiger Lily
heart sings viewing
in sunlight

Tiger Lily
in sunlight
heart sings viewing
Tiger lily
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Tiger Lily
heart sings viewing
in sunlight

heart sings viewing
in sunlight
heart sings viewing
Tiger Lily
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Tiger Lily
heart sings viewing

in sunlight
in sunlight
in sunlight
heart sings viewing
Tiger Lily

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