silvery moon glows
remember youthful nights
eyes filled with moonshine
Lone Ranger ~ white horse
magic bullet saves the day
Silver bullet lies
Posted by siggiofmaine in NaHaiWriMo Tags: haiku, Haiku Heights, Lone Ranger and Siver, magic bullet, Silver moon, Siver
Look for A Lovely Thing
September 4, 2013 at 1:07 pm
beautiful, siggi. I love the 2nd line of the first haiku. “youthful nights filled with moonshine.”
September 4, 2013 at 1:10 pm
I meant I read it wrong the first time as “youthful nights filled with moonshine” as if some heavy drinking was goin’ on. LOL.
“EYES filled with moonshine.”
Sigrid Gerstner Stevens Saradunn
September 4, 2013 at 3:37 pm
I read your other comment…I realized that it could be read like you did at first….. I did the same thing when I was editing it…ad decided to let the reader decided if the youth were filled “up to their eyes filled with moonshine.”…”filled up to my eyes” was a phrase I remember being used for over indulging especially with food, but it could be liquids too !
Thanks for both comments…I enjoyed your interpretation…I sometimes forget that everyone doesn’t know how I think or the “local-isms I grew up with.
Appreciate your feed back.
September 4, 2013 at 3:38 pm
I love this interpretation !
Thanks for the comment.
September 3, 2013 at 11:03 pm
siggiofmaine posted: “.
silvery moon glowing . remember youthful nights . eyes filled with moonshine
Lone Ranger ~ white horse . magic bullet saves the day . Silver bullet lies
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