From Carpe Diem Post
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monument of love
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earthquake created great loss
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world picks up pieces
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This post has been corrected due to my “brain sprain”
which episode I had for the title…sorry for any
confusion…the title matches the “ku now to the
best of my knowledge.
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© Sigrid Saradunn 2013 fog at Somesville Library
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This “Little Ones” episode
is about the Burmese poetry form ‘Thanbauk’.
It consists of three lines of four syllables each.
Traditionally, they are full of humour.
It also has a rhyme in it.
The rhyme is on the fourth syllable of the first line,
the third syllable of the second,
and on the second syllable of the third.
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X X X A
X X A X
X A X X
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I tried for “Thanbauk” form, without the humor.
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fog over lake
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small green snake slinks
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frogs take long nap
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siggiofmaine 