© Sigrid Saradunn 2010 Hackmatack tree …. aka Tamarack

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The challenge is to add two 7 syllable lines

to   Ammol ‘s  haiku to form a tan renga.

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entangled branches

sun ascends through lifeless limbs

beautiful chaos   ……………….. Ammol

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* Hackmatack  joyous morning

   twists  ~  shouts ~~~  winds revive  ~  give life

 

………………….Saradunn

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*aka Tamarack

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