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A skein of Canadian Geese flying south for the winter.

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The challenge is to add two 7 syllable lines

to  Lothar’s (Rheumatologe)  haiku to form a tan renga.

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this dark autumn night

the bright stars of milky way

cries of geese above……….Lothar

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call of yearning to be home

universe leads flock’s instincts……..Saradunn

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