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solitude-winter-tree

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Solitude … my response

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comfort of silence

. doe with fawn out back

. revelations dawn

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I was unable to post yesterday

due to putting my laptop in the shop

I had written for the prompt

Carpe Diem #621, first light

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dawn’s first rays

mountain top coast of Maine

smoke from wood stoves

 

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From the prompt Solitude:

“….the prompt for today, solitude, another wonderful modern kigo extracted from Jane Reichhold’s “A Dictionary of Haiku”. Solitude …. loneliness, emptiness, isolation or silence, all synonyms for solitude. I (Chèvrefeuille) think I can write a nice haiku with this prompt, but let me first look at the examples of Jane Reichhold.
 
the shape of wind
writing in dunes
loneliness


alone in the house
the flavor of peppermint
cold on the tongue


a journey begins
the way familiar
to the door

 

frozen to his feet
the length of a shadow
wanting to sleep
 
© Jane Reichhold
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 our host writes:
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the vastness of the heath
just the sound of fresh fallen snow
a cold moonlit night
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© Chèvrefeuille
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That wasn’t easy. As I started to ‘connect’ with solitude the first thing I felt was the loneliness of a field of heath in the middle of winter. Wandering in the moonlit night …. the freezing cold, the soft cracking of snow. I just had to catch that feeling in a haiku …
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Here is another version:
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a cold moonlit night
just the sound of fresh fallen snow –
wandering over the moors
© Chèvrefeuille

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The prompt:
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Today our second haiku by Yosa Buson. Buson 

was a haiku-poet and he also created wonderful haiga as a painter 
… so he was really an artist.
Buson had the honor to illustrate the first paper publication
of Basho’s ”Narrow Road to the Deep North” (Oku No Hosomichi),
the most famous haibun ever written. 
Buson however wrote wonderful haiku too.

In an earlier post at CDHK we had haiku about ”melon-flowers” 

and the haiku by Buson which I love to share here is also on ”melons”.

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adabana wa ame ni utarete uri batake

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fruitless blossoms
are beaten by the rain
in the melon fields

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© Buson (Tr. by Thomas McAuley)

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A beautiful haiku I think … 

well I hope it will inspire you to write haiku. 

Here is my attempt to write a haiku in the spirit of Buson.

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every where I look
the yellow flowers of melons 
after a sunny day

 

© Chèvrefeuille

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My response to the prompt:

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cantaloupe blossom

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long dry summer days and nights

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thirsty for rain

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