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first day of spring
fresh snow covers blossoms
Nor’Easter
spots of color brighten day
early blooms shiver
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seize the poem Prompt #13 your words
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photo: Mike Keville, prompt photo
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photo (c) Saradunn NorEaster Iola..1/24/2015
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Prompt: Small stones:
a journey of mindfulness: sound
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My Response to the Prompt:
Sound of Snow Falling
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silence
birds in hiding
snow falling
crunch under foot ~ gather wood
fireplace ~ sizzle snap of flames
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Saradunn
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This southerly view shows Somes Sound as seen from the north end in Somesville, Maine on Mount Desert Island. Bar Harbor is to the north and northeast of this point. |
My response to the prompt:
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Credits: Grey Glacier Torres del Paine National Park Chile |
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This glacier looks fantastic … let me look at the haiku which Jane uses for example for this modern kigo for winter according to her “A Dictionary of Haiku”:
under low clouds
evening sky glacier
cools the wind
a journey ends
where the glacier melted
a field of stones
© Jane Reichhold
Two extraordinary beautiful haiku I think ….
Our host Kristjaan Panneman aka © Chèvrefeuille shared:
as far as I can see
blueish, greyish and whiteish snow
first glacier contact
© Chèvrefeuille
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photo from prompt
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My response to the prompt:
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snow falling
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The Prompt:
Than I have here our Carpe Diem Special, a haiku by our featured haiku-poet, Richard Wright (1908-1960) … he was a forefighter of the Black Americans and in his last years he discovered haiku. He wrote a lot of haiku (more than 4000) and compiled an anthology of his own work with 880 haiku. He is really a great haiku-poet and I am loving his work very much. So let us go on to another wonderful haiku written by him. I have tried to use a haiku which is close to the GW-post earlier in this post. I think I have found a nice one to share here for your inspiration.
In the falling snow
A laughing boy holds out his palms
Until they are white.
© Richard Wright
The goal of the Carpe Diem Special is to write a haiku inspired on the given haiku by the featured haiku poet and try to touch the same sense, tone and spirit.
Here is my ( Kristjaan Panneman) attempt:
through the early night
the laugh of children playing –
virgin snow
© Chèvrefeuille
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(c) 2013 Saradunn
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Today the goal is to write a classical haiku following the classical rules of haiku.
So your haiku has to follow the next rules:
2. 5-7-5 syllables;
3. Use a kigo (or seasonword);
4. Use a kireji (or cuttingword);
5. Sometimes a deeper spiritual or Zen-Buddhistic meaning;
6. First and third line are interchangeable and last but not least
7. No Self, avoid personal or possessive pronouns (I, me, my);
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frigid air ~ sleet ~ snow
