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The mind is like a building without windows.
As much as we’d wish to,
we can’t see in and know what another thinks
or why…genetics, an ailing mind,
response to the environment or others.
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The thought most echoed before the cry
of “oh, no, not me” “I hope not me”
when the signs of the ailing mind
or body start sneaking out.
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Most know the sound of the echo:
“oh, no” “oh, no” “NO !”
and then one thinks
“I hope it’s not a tragedy,”
or
“I hope it’s not about me
or one I love.” hearing
the echo before the cry
of pain from a now ailing mind.
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A family with a history of ailing minds
or, maybe living with a youngster or
spouse with an ailing mind
may fear that others may pick it up:
the signs, the symptoms that
try to hide like living in a
building without windows.
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The mind is like a building without windows.
As much as we’d wish to,
we can’t see in and know what another thinks.
We may pick it up from rumors,
or the newspaper or even the tv.
The ailing mind carries so much discrimination
fear, and denial that
the echo be fore the cry may be silent,
bouncing off the walls of the mind,
not for others to know or hear.
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The mind is like a building without windows.
The echo before the cry is that we hope
the ailing mind is not picked up by others
The mind is like a building without windows.
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The Prompts: The echo before the cry//ailing mind//I hope not/
Pick it up//building without windows
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TheOthers1
February 27, 2012 at 11:23 pm
I love how you used the the prompt “building without windows”. The mind is like a building without windows.
siggiofmaine
February 27, 2012 at 11:26 pm
To TheOthers1
Thank you for the kind comment…appreciate you taking the time to comment.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
bekindrewrite
February 25, 2012 at 7:15 pm
Such a sense of isolation and fear, yet coupled with the sense of being surrounded by others. Love the part:
the echo be fore the cry may be silent,
bouncing off the walls of the mind,
not for others to know or hear.”
siggiofmaine
February 25, 2012 at 7:21 pm
BeKindRewrite..
thanks for the comment…It just sort of fell out of the keyboard onto the screen.
I didn’t do much more than edit for sentence structure and seeing if it sort of made sense.
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Appreciate you taking the time to comment.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
becca givens
February 25, 2012 at 6:25 pm
Ahh, what an interesting concept, siggi —
The mind is like a building without windows. AND The echo before the cry …
Both give me pause!
siggiofmaine
February 25, 2012 at 7:28 pm
Becca…
thanks for the comment…
it just sort of came out of no where. But sort of made sense after deciding what was the building without windows..
Peace,
Siggi